I Went Ahead Poem by Iulia Lex

I Went Ahead

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I went ahead and said that no,
I'm not alone in this..
But yes, I'm rightfully confused.

I went ahead and did
What was impossible to build
In my own head -
I went ahead and met
My future and my own demise:

To travel to a place unknown
Inside your mind, a star unborn
To meet its end, its own collapse
Imploding, slowly, in your eyes.

So in the end I went ahead
And fled the yesterday we held
For just a wild, fleeting glimpse
In our own clutching hand - in hand.

Friday, October 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: confusion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 08 April 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Lulia. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Sofia Kioroglou 31 October 2015

Brilliant dear! I loved every line and word. Good to have you on poemhunter.com. Wish you all the best and keep entertaining us with your work! P.S If you would like to join my poetry blog on sofiakioroglou.wordpress.com be welcome! Take care and God bless you

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Fabrizio Frosini 30 October 2015

Welcome at P.H., Iulia! your first poem is a well penned one.. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing Ciao dall'Italia

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Kelly Kurt 30 October 2015

Very nicely written, Lulia. Thanks

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