I've Been Away Too Long... Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

I've Been Away Too Long...

Rating: 4.5


I'm sorry I've been gone so long
That's not the dog we had before
I realize that I was wrong
I can't be absent any more.

You say our daughter's moved away
Our son is in the army now
It seems like just the other day
He was learning to milk the cow

This front-room carpet once was green
And now it is a lovely tan
On married life I was not keen
I panicked and that's why I ran

I thought I would be gone a day
And then that day turned into weeks
My brain is wrecked; my hair's turned gray
My whiskers rampant on my cheeks

And then those weeks turned into years
I fought the bottle and the pills
I'm always found with bitter tears
Sometimes with fever, sometimes chills

Can I come back? Please say it's so
I could not live if you say no
If you can make yourself forgive
I'll love you as long as I live.

I've Been Away Too Long...
Sunday, November 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: abandoned,alone,change,crazy,depression,family,future,home,hope,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Not based on my real life, just my imagination.

Written 13 November 2016
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 11 May 2019

You almost had me convinced this was slightly autobiographical, instead you just tell a good story, sorry that I have missed this!

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Tom Billsborough 17 November 2016

A very fine poem. Very poignant as Nosheen said. Think I'll stick it in my favourites' list.

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Nosheen Irfan 15 November 2016

Poignant but beautiful. A wonderful manifestation of love. Family life is important. Very beautifully expressed.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2016

This is very wonderful poem on life facing changes day to day. There is grief and joy in life always. Having love for long time is nice.10

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Barry Middleton 13 November 2016

I would not go back if she paid me. But your poem is amusing. LOL

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