I Say More Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Say More

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What a happy surprise
You were firm on promise
To walk hand in hand
And not mere as friend

Proposal for sharing of love
Was difficult to believe
But you were honest in approach
I decided to fall for as such

I needed soft touch
With love and feelings as such
You are now free and determined
I love the way and do not mind

I dream about wonderland
Where we may have an end
Hand in hand and love to love
The moment we share and drive

My eyes close with sun shine
As you look divine
Very much firm and decisive
I am at this end to receive

My beautiful journey
May be blessed by an almighty
You shall be with me forever
What should I say more?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

What a happy surprise You were firm on promise

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i don't know izzy garrett29 minutes ago honestly, well first its very long and well I don't know it really okay. The poem just doesn't speak to me sorry

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love enternal CHERYL HOLLOWAY30 minutes ago is blissful Comment +1

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superb Larry Stallings29 minutes ago beautiful verse

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I am at this end to receive Chrissy Pilgrim14 minutes ago the poem speaks of love eternal. Comment +1

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catherine lajul Nice! 14 seconds ago

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AN EXOTIC~SA.. Excellent.... beautiful journey.....To walk hand in hand....a... promise today

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pallavi sharma i'm speechless very emotional and truthful from the bottom of the heart...only fortunate ones feel the merge of souls! ...and the presence of each other is itself blissful and fulfilling hearts and whole body with immense joy and abudence of pleasure... amazing... today

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Have Faith hmmmm.......nice, tks Sir for sharing

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??? Jocelyn V.. so lovely today by hasmukh amathalal

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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