I Saw The Heaven Poem by S.D. TIWARI

I Saw The Heaven

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Last night I slept, was drowned in dream
Angels came, played and danced with me.
A child angel wanted to take me together
But senior angels refused to accept his prayer.

Lastly, they agreed to take me for a day
Saying after visiting heaven, at once go back.
On the way, first door came was of the hell
Show me this also, with curiosity I did tell.

There, on a big table, kept variety of dishes
Inter continental, Indian and delicious fishes.
People sitting around, tied with long spoons
So long in both hands taking away the boon.

No one could eat, hands going here and there
Food was spread on table, floor, everywhere.
Kingdom of flies and germs was spread over
Anarchy, disorder, battle for food was to hover.

Habitats of Hell fighting and hurting each other
Snatching food as have been starving for ever
No one could eat properly, remained hungry
It’s a madhouse planet, for the reasons sundry.

In act of selfishness they were doing more sin
Terrified by demons and Devil was punishing.
Now I shall take you to heaven, the angel said
We reached the heaven that was just ahead.

In heaven also variety of dishes on a big table
People had their hands tied with long ladle
But there was, I noticed the scene different
Habitats not giving themselves any preference.

They had made a system instead of himself
Each member was feeding some one else
Orderly system kept, place was nice and neat
It was amazing every one was able to eat.

By co-operation they easily fulfilled their needs
Happy angels helped and hopped for their deeds
No fight, no battle and no hotchpotch situation
Every one was enjoying, in the God’s heaven.


(C) S.D. Tiwari

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 30 September 2011

A nice piece of poetry... Wonderful depiction of heaven.... Well written.. Tops marks for you

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 September 2011

Every one was enjoying, in the God’s heaven.....yes nice place dreamed by everyone... lovely poem.....10

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