I Pity The Criticizers Poem by LOST PRINCESS

I Pity The Criticizers

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I pity the criticizers
who have no life
only live to monitor
my every move
And make a fool
Out of themselves
Why'd you cut your hair?
Why don't you do your homework?
Why do you write all the time?
Why do you draw all the time?
Why dont you do this? Why dont you do that?
I pity the criticizers
They monitor our every move
And worry about what we do
How we look
What we wear
I pity the criticizers
They live without a life
When they consume all of ours
Living only to monitor our every step
every day, every dream, and
every touch
Hey all you criticizers
We've had just about enough!
So get a life, get the f*** out of mine,
and criticize yourself for a change.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 21 May 2009

I canna ken u hear, me dearie, dey luvs u muchly, i suspect..cood it be ur der only dauter...iip

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 29 April 2009

haters..ha! they're just insecure..good of u to have expressed it..outstanding work!

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Enola Tompson 15 January 2009

i remeber this one, you showed it to me in seminar! i love it! i wish i could write 1/2 as wel as you do!

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Sebastine Humaemo 10 December 2008

haha lol....hy brittany i can see how much your wild on the criticizers....yah its really true.........nice work....enjoyed reading it........sebastine

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great write... thank you for sharing :)

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