Captain Cur

Rookie - 340 Points (England)

I Need You To Live, love poems


I bow down low,
I take your hand,
and I invite you to dance.
I hold you close;
I place my palm,
upon the small of your back.
The lights aglow,
the music slow
my mind is held in a trance,
I trace my steps
my body bound
the ballroom spins me around.

I see your eyes,
I feel your breath,
and my inward motion is calm.
You lean inside
hands on my chest,
your soft arms coming to rest.
I press your waist,
I hear you sigh
your knees bend in and rise.
I ease my pace;
I touch your face
and bring you down to my lips.

We feel all alone
our still bodies prone,
we brush lightly to kiss.
Your strapless black dress,
your formal white gloves
I need you to live.
The beat just replays
when hearts are ablaze,
I crave your caress.
What would I give,
I need you to live
I give you my love.

Submitted: Sunday, May 26, 2013
Edited: Monday, May 27, 2013

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Ambrosia A (6/9/2013 11:02:00 PM)

    Feels like as if I am in the ball room, so l romantic, loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (6/6/2013 10:41:00 AM)

    this write is very musical with a smooth flow. Enjoyed the read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 55 Points Jahan Zeb (5/31/2013 10:28:00 AM)

    I really enjoyed reading it in one go. So rhythmic and musical. Sensational one. I liked the way it gained pace. Beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,016 Points Unwritten Soul (5/30/2013 5:42:00 AM)

    Honest and tell all feeling, no pirate that better than you! ! i rather be your prisoner than under power of people that claim they are good_SOul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 318 Points Poetheart Morgan (5/27/2013 5:39:00 PM)

    AH! That is be a good dancer! ! ! ! ! We can almost dance with you! ! ! (Report) Reply

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