veeraiyah subbulakshmi


Iin Human's Terrace - Poem by veeraiyah subbulakshmi

There are so many smiling blooms
The moment we approach them,
Those may say not only touch them not,
But also close their lips of the leaves,
Sometimes when we touch the spiky dream,
We may start to scratch and scream,
When we are careless, not wearing,
The cautious sandals or the shoes,
We are poked with words of pins and needles,
Certain stems are jovial and dance the trapeze,
Engrossed in their own and others affairs,
The shrubs are small, neatly cut with,
Budget and financial loads of brain full,
Stand still as the window and door frames,
Weeds of variation have to be mowed down,
The garden of human is lighted with xenon,
The heart of them repair on its own.


Comments about Iin Human's Terrace by veeraiyah subbulakshmi

  • Gold Star - 8,965 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (11/3/2013 11:20:00 PM)

    We need to face a variety of strange characters. Act as the interaction demands. Beautifully developed in the poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (11/2/2013 11:08:00 AM)

    A poem that emphasises the need for a self analysis as well. Well written with a different seed of thoughts madam.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 2, 2013


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