~ I Ms. Nivedita: That Rookie ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.
~ I Ms. Nivedita: That Rookie ~
~ I MS. NIVEDITA: THAT ROOKIE ~
Ms. Nivedita.
07.11.09.
UK
Liberty fixation to fashiondom
Elitists indulging jocund stardom,
Rookie like me
It’s utter bedroom boredom.
Joy of
Imprisoned liberty
Phew out
Share shout yell:
Futility of untidy elitedom,
Utility of tidy weedom.
Stardom crispy pop corn
Aftertaste without
Weedom boiled barley
Aftertaste lingering with.
Weedom is wisdom
Stardom is clichéd Omnidom.
Stardom the
Unhappy haveall
Weedom the
Happy havenot.
Stardom into-ing
Enjoying scanty in plenty
Weedom into-ing
Savoring plenty in scanty.
Stardom the clamp bottleneck
Acheful squeeze out,
Weedom the zigzag rill
Flow drift in joy oozing out.
Stardom is ‘selfhomicidal’
Weedom is heady survival.
Cloak off stardom
Cloak in weedom.
I Ms. Nivedita: That Rookie.
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calling bedroom boredom? a rookie? its complicated and interesting n shws just to what lengths a human brain can think....
Dear Nivedita, What you've written here is complete defiance! Good luck, keep posting. Thanks for sharing such a daring candor of your 'mind-dom'! Regards, Sayantan
A 10++ To come out out in the open For more And let it be crass, Yet this schism Reaps silence as never before
It got me into a feel of being trapped in bottlenecks - in a sacristy and at the same time touched 'me chord' with youthful vigor - eloquence - unharnessed passion forcefully bound within frame.
You have talent real stardom and your poems never cause any boredom to any careful reader
I like the flow of this poem, carries you along with it, beatiful!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 2:01:49 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Niv: Tlhis is a very tantalizing poem written with much authority. I don't see the rookie. Very good Poem. Your friend Lynn