I'M Sure I'Ve Never Been A Deer Poem by moon batchelder

I'M Sure I'Ve Never Been A Deer

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i'm sure i've never been a deer;
not buck, nor fawn, nor yearling doe.
i may have been a cat, perhaps,
but nothing quite so tame as that
small tribe of cloven hooves just there.
i'm sure i've never been a deer.

i'm close to positive at least,
i've never been so docile - tame
as those soft creatures walking by;
timidity, their alibi
and camoflage. such gentle beasts.
to my ferocious mind, - a feast!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 07 September 2006

This is a very good poem Moon, I like it very much. Deer are very beautiful animals and they do make good meals as well---excellent--Melvina

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Shelley B. Keats 31 August 2006

Yes! I enjoyed this very much. Humans are so charming!

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bemidji, minnesota
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