I'M Moving On! Poem by Clarence Prince

I'M Moving On!



I’m on my way I’m moving on
Out of my way let me go on
I’m going straight I will not wait
I can’t stay I wont delay
I’m moving on to glory land

I’m moving on I’m moving on
I’m moving along I’m moving on
I’m moving on I’m moving on
I can’t stay I won’t delay
I’m moving on to glory land

I saw a light shining far away
Where no one fears to ever stray
It’s a distant land with my Saviour there
I can’t stay I won’t delay
I’m moving on to glory Land

I head a train coming on the line
It’s coming fast its coming on time
I can’t decline that train is mine
I can’t stay I won’t delay
I’m moving on to glory land




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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's just a little song I thought of writing!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 14 December 2015

and i think i can get around PH and make I'M into I'm in the title, as i know you want it that way. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 14 December 2015

yes, it sounds like a nice poetic song. just a few tiny typos i think. wont in stanza 1 AND, in stanza 4, first two lines: I head a train coming on the line It’s coming fast its coming on time ......................either heard or hear, not head ..........ha ha :) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - and its in second line. ho ho! ! and i think you assent to me correcting them before i squeeze this into December's a showcase for PH poets, Section A. thanks for letting me use it, kind sir. bri :)

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