I'M Just Fine Poem by stephanie Ann Lowe

I'M Just Fine

Rating: 5.0


I am left, unable to love as before.
All this time, I have wanted love,
and now that it is at my door, I cannot
bring myself to answer,
I know it will not be you who is knocking.
It is a sad thing,
to come so close to your dream.
yes, i smile.
i still have laughter too.

To all outward appearances,
I've still plenty of wind in my sails.
but my heels and makeup
are the emotional lacquer
that covers up the dirt under my nails.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 28 June 2011

The emotion inspired you well...it kinda a relief when you release all what you belief...well life still moving on either we pick to move along or not...i know by the way you write it sound so ' oh i am tired all of this, just want to have something i wanted to have'..it was a nice write yes i mean it.. :) _Unwritten Soul

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 27 June 2011

Great poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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