I'M Going To Dance! Poem by Kasia Fedyk

I'M Going To Dance!

Rating: 3.7


I'm going to dance
I'm going to dance!

I will see the stars
holding hands with the moon
kisses send from the shutting stars
will twirl on my soul
with no control

I'm going to dance
I'm going to dance!

I will dissolve
disoriented fear
and send it
to the clouds
the cotton puffs
so white and pure
will turn grey
for a moment to come
and thunders sound
when fear is there
will clear the air
after its all done
all will be one

I'm going to dance
I'm going to dance!

On the canvas
and imprint
my heart
on the blank
white cloth
not red
but silver and gold

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilson 03 August 2012

You dance Kasia, on the canvas with silver and gold.a lovely idea and poem.

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Neela Nath Das 12 August 2012

Your words are so rhythmic that they make dance our hearts.A cheerful poem on art of living.Lovely!

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Hamid Negah 05 August 2012

Kasia, as other your poems this is a beautiful poem too, i enjoyed so much.

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Eric Cockrell 04 August 2012

a beautiful statement of living!

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Valerie Dohren 04 August 2012

Very imaginative write Kasia, quite lovely.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 04 August 2012

yeah, this poem make contact with me straightly. when i read it, just the feeling of my favorite song came to me...Welcome to the hotel California....such a lovely place...such a lovely face....they living up at the Hotel California....! really fantastic poem! a creative mind!

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