I'M Finished Poem by Sesamarna Syfyre

I'M Finished



You said you cared
For me, yet you put
Me down every night

You wouldn't let me do
What I want, you
Deystroy the times I
Could have had fun

I picked up the razor
To life and pressed
It to my skin

You told me to stop
That is wasnt worth it
I listened like always
And put it down

After I heard you diss
My friend that I cared for
It fliped my switch and
I picked up the razor again

This time I succeeded and
Watched my life go by
You disapointed me so many
Times...

Im finished.


(To my friend amber who is really cool, but isn't happy.)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suzie Smith 01 May 2007

I believe that your poem shows your feeling to whomever your writing it about I believe it is very well wrote.

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THE FIRST SHRIKE 01 May 2007

How was that you came to be in the manner in which are? The poetry inside your heart is to some like glass all to clear.

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