I Love You, Goodbye! Poem by samhark samonte

I Love You, Goodbye!



Tell me what I should follow;
My heart that’s telling me to do what I wanna do,
Or my mind that tells me to just let you go?

Oh! Could you please help me decide about it baby
‘Cause every time I think of this, it is only driving me crazy;
I hate it babes, I hate the way I feel
But I know in my heart that this feeling is real.

I observed it from others that age doesn’t matter,
But why is it with us, AGE GAP is a big deal?
If I can make my age a bit older then I’ll do
I will make it for love, if that’s what you want me to.

But of course that’s impossible so I’ll just accept the fact,
That you are just a dream and what I want can’t be right;
I have to say goodbye even though I will miss you
Your teases, your jokes and everything about you.

Before I let you go I wanted to let you know
You’ll be forever in my heart and I know that no one else will do
Before I let you go I want to say……
I love you…..


=Samhark_04=

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2009

Tell me what I should follow; My heart that’s telling me to do what I wanna do, Or my mind that......... really it has flowed from touchy heart giving ven to all the feeling u had in mind.. i liked it most for the simple reason that it has natural instinct in it....10 read mine.. all dreams not come true... anywhere and home bound

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 August 2009

Your feeling flows right to the wire.Nice writes Samhark.

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Beauty Philosophy 08 August 2009

The age gap ir really a problem in love...Love in itself at that tender age is very fragile and liable to change...So don't trust ur feelings now cause they are still fluctuating and you are still in the phase of auto-discovery and world discovery. WISH U GOOD LUCK! good write!

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Rhonda Moody 08 August 2009

Sometimes a love we cant have we want it all the more...Good write with honesty and feeling..

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