I Hate That Girl Poem by Aaron Richard

I Hate That Girl



This is my first poem. I really liked this girl, but the things she's done have poisoned my mind and made me write this.

Beneath the mask of an angelic girl,
Lives the evil hearted veiled troll,
Changed my ways but never changed her own,
Negativity is left in my body of flesh n bone.

I can't believe, to you i let myself fall prey,
Your heart is colder than an ice cube in the ice tray,
You killed the 'old' me with words like dew drops from a rose,
And now, I am lost in this desert of lost souls.

Enough of this, i cant take it no more.
The time is close to wake up from this dream and hit the floor.
No more are you the angel i thought i knew
That is why i am writing this poem of hate to you.

Hate cannot be described or summed up in one word
That's the reason i poured my heart out like a wounded bird.
If I would killed this change in me brought by you,
I could have killed this monster (you) inside too.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tyease Collins 03 July 2008

Ahh man the emotion in this poem...I love the hate like seriously...such powerful words...i like your style of writing...10/10 -Tyease

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Evaughn Gray 23 February 2008

wow that was powerful and strong..hate i love the word, you can describe it through alot of things.great poem.~hazel.

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N Aga Shashidhar Pisapati 12 February 2008

The poems' really coool. u have a gud taste in using the words. but... i suggest u 2 write poems on other stuff

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Dzekashu MacViban 12 February 2008

A good poem laden with emotion and individuality, which shows us that things are not always the way we see 'em.

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