I Found A Star Poem by karin collins

I Found A Star

Rating: 4.9


I found a star up in the sky,
And named it after you.
It watches over every night,
And listens closely too.

It waits to hear your secret dreams,
Your thoughts and wishes true.
It won’t ever tell a soul,
It’s there from me to you.

I hope it guides you safely,
With its glowing light.
Through the nights black darkness,
To the morning bright.

So when you look up in the sky,
And see your shining star.
Know that I am wishing too,
From not so very far.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 07 October 2006

well writen poem...I agree with Krantol though just a little tightening up could make this poem perfect.......

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Krantol Northic 04 October 2006

A little bit of nitpicking could be done to perfect this, but otherwise, good job. Commented, Krantol

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