I Danced My Life Away Poem by Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

I Danced My Life Away



I saw the faces of the moon...
the yawns of the stars at night.
The moon is wilder every minute
as I danced my life away.

I saw the last rays of the fallen sun
dying into a dance...dying as they fade.
The rain dropped slowly and dreams gather
as I danced my life away.

I saw as days turn to empty nights...
the beauty of the water as it sparkles.
But i never saw you-
so I danced my life away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Oldham 12 September 2008

Lovely description...utter despair... love it! Thanks Athena xxx

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Sreelekha Premjit 12 March 2008

I love the way despair is conveyed in the poem. tnx for sharing.

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