Jessel Jane Tevar

Rookie - 0 Points (December 6,1988 / Philippines)

*a Little While Eternal - Poem by Jessel Jane Tevar

Tell him i love to make these words
a song with his luscious lips...
and make the rhythm of my heart
be mellow music to his ears.
I'd love to make every moment with him
a little while eternal...
dancing and singing-
laughing, whispering
till the stars will slowly fall.

Tell him I love to make these lines
a love poem with his earnest smile,
and make his heart be sunlight
to my darkest sky.
I'd love to make every minute with him
a little while eternal-
feeling and loving...
smiling while kissing
till the stars will slowly fall.

Tell him I love to make his hair
my shadow with his teasing eyes.
And make his voice a melody
till the fearful evening dies.
I'd love to make every day with him
a little while eternal...
smiling and touching-
holding, caressing
till the stars will slowly fall.


Comments about *a Little While Eternal by Jessel Jane Tevar

  • Rookie James Jason Dye (12/20/2008 9:51:00 PM)

    This was well-written and beautiful. (Report) Reply

    2 person liked.
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  • Rookie - 233 Points Kesav Easwaran (12/13/2008 4:58:00 AM)

    lines romantic soft and sweet...breezing as one reads on...'make his heart be sunlight to my darkest sky...' is a pleasing phrase...good work, Jane...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Raj Arumugam (11/8/2008 9:41:00 PM)

    a lyrical and beautiful poem...it has a wonderful ring and rhythm to it.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (10/19/2008 9:07:00 PM)

    10 for this lovely love poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Geovanni Leaño (2/10/2008 3:26:00 AM)

    wow!

    i'm speechless! i'm too lucky to have discovered this site! ^_^

    well anyway i just wanted to inform you Jane that this poem left my heart warm and touched my face with a smile ^_^

    thanks!
    -GanNi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mary Gordley (2/7/2008 10:53:00 PM)

    Jane I found this very lovely and romantic as heck. Thanks (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 6, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, February 8, 2008


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