I Couldnt Poem by autumn jasper

I Couldnt



i couldnt look you in the eye
i knew just what youd say
i hurt you and pushed you far away
now im happy
but your cold and abandoned
i want to show how it felt
to be mistreated and under aperciated
i touched your cold lips
i let you disappear
but only for a moment i want you here
my eyes are full of tears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefanie Fontker 11 September 2011

Interesting poem. This could be a lot better with some grammar and spelling touch-ups, but I still like this. Great poetry.

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