I Can Do Better Than You Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

I Can Do Better Than You

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What commuters in cars

really really want

is to look at their screens

like they can

in a bus.



No; more.



They want to increase

the size of their screens,

to lay back in their cars,

to watch with their hands

behind their heads,

to be seen having one over

on those

hunched over their screens

in a bus.

Tuesday, October 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: car,competition ,phone,smart,victory
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 11 October 2017

the title reminds me of a song. to MyPoemList. ============================= are you, Doug, talking about the commuter drivers or passengers? ? ? we all drive hands-free-of-the-steering-wheel HERE in California! ! ! yay! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! bri :) p.s. to lay back in their cars, ..............i would use lie back or lean back i especially like this line: No; more.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2017

There is competition everywhere. Obviously you can be better than others and you ca be victorious. Determination and nice attitude is expressed in this poem...10

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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