I Blame You Poem by LUZAAN de Bruyn

I Blame You

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THE PAIN IS EATING ME LIKE AN FLESH EATING ILLNESS
MY HEART BEAT DISAPPEARED LIKE I DIED
FIGHTING DEATH WITH ALL MY MIGHT
SOMETIMES I CANT SEE
OR I SEE ONE AS THREE
THE FRIGHT IS UNRAVELING
EVERYTHING WRONG IS HAPPENING
MY BODY SHAKEING,
SOUNDS OF GLASS BREAKING
MY FEAR CAME TRUE
I ONLY BLAME YOU
MY HEART BROKEN
MY SOUL HAS SPOKEN
ITS TIME TO GO
THE THOUGHT IS HARDCORE
BUT STILL MY HEART IS SORE
NOW THAT I AM OLDER
THE WORLD IS COLDER
I TRIED NOT TO CRY
I THOUGHT IT WAS JUST A LIE
YOU WOULD NEVER KILL ME
YOU WERE MY FRIEND
A FRIEND THAT CAUSED MY END
YOU MADE MY FEAR COME TRUE
I WILL FOR ALWAYS BLAME YOU

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Silent Speaker 10 July 2009

your writing is amazing. so mature with such depth. great job! ! ! !

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Sinkie Phoole Phoole 26 February 2009

hi there no disrespect, but you are too young to be so deep. your material is so profound. your heart is burdened with pain. you got a story to tell. tell us, we are listening.

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