* I Await My Sun Shine Poem by Randy Hogan

Randy Hogan

Randy Hogan

pænˈ dʒ iː ə Mountain Range

* I Await My Sun Shine

Rating: 2.8


Swans dance on the ripping waves.
Wing and wing,
as tempest blows temperature south,
Leaves change form green to red.
For not long the leaves wither and fade.
Soon the snow will kiss the moss.
passing seasons, are not lost
When all the while white,
delightful, feather's of white fill my heart,
at last the wait was worth it.
For spring has released the song birds,
Now my heart is light free as a wing of a swan
for winter has released us,
once again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 21 April 2009

very beautiful.... a lovely sight... impressive... i love this....goes to my fave.. 10++++

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Fay Slimm 22 April 2009

'Spring has released the songbirds' - that is one beautiful phrase in this enchanting verse Randy - - well composed and a 10 from Fay....

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Anjali Sinha 28 April 2009

hey beautiful--- awaiting autumn haan the change of colour of the leaves -10 anjali

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Kasia Fedyk 16 June 2012

Beauty of every season so perfectly described. I have just experienced all of them at once. Beautiful! ! Thank you so much!

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Lexi Zamora 22 December 2010

Omg that is beautiful

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Now my heart is light free as a wing of a swan for winter has released us, once again.... it is beautiful write and desrves attention.. good one read mine sun n son, the sun and i am disgrace, come home

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There is so much joy in this poem Randy. The repetition of white and alliteration of 'w' is magic. 'Spring has released the song bird' had me utterly and totally captured with this piece. 10/10

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~ Jon London ~ 01 May 2009

A stunning painted spring day, your finely penned lines dance with colour... Very well written

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