*caged-Freedom Poem by Randy Hogan

Randy Hogan

Randy Hogan

pænˈ dʒ iː ə Mountain Range

*caged-Freedom

Rating: 2.9


Setting on my perch
singing like a wren.
In-caged in paradise,
master opens the door.
To set me free, Hurry! , hurry! ,
close it before evil gets in.
for my paradise is my prison

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reshma Ramesh 26 May 2009

well thought out and well penned randy...........clap clap! !

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Fay Slimm 19 May 2009

Profound thoughts are contained within this verse Randy - - and my friend you have caged those gems so expertly for the reader to remember - - the phrase 'in-caged in paradise' is inspired, and is in itself food for comment - - -... a well deserved 10 + +++ from Fay.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 15 May 2009

Sometimes there is so much anguish in the outer world that cage seems like a paradise.......A Good Write......

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Naidz Ladia 14 May 2009

freedom...that is everyone's wish...a brief piece but full of meaning...naizz

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Anjali Sinha 14 May 2009

wowwwwww this is a very unusual concept caged freedom-- for a paradise in prison lovely thoughts +++10 anjali

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