...I And Me-2 Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

...I And Me-2

Rating: 5.0


In the unclear mist,
of hasty perceptions,
the sun of reality eludes me.

on the cusp of life and death,
I see a meaning,
of a thoughtless being,
everlasting,
through the joys and agonies,
of matter and non-matter.
I grope for that consciousness,
to bless its depth,
in my vacant crevices.

all my body,
becomes one speck,
of a hidden spark, unveiled,
and the encrypted truths,
criss-cross my existence.
The fathomless boundaries of
my endless perceptions,
fade away softly…
and some unknown darkness,
grips my heart,
and a roaring chaos,
infatuates my senses,

All my cognitions,
unite in the aftermath,
and in the culmination of the incantations,
‘I’ take birth again,
after the death of a certain ‘me’.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 29 June 2009

it's a continous process of birth and death, isn't it, sarvesh?

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Maitreyee Joshi 29 June 2009

a good one.u seem to be on the edge of to be or not to be, good better excellent, yet to be decided, is it?

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Kesav Easwaran 23 September 2009

yes...in many ways we die many times and take rebirths in one single life...the wise and the intelligent are aware of this...only very few of them dwell on these thoughts...and now you are one - i find deep and intelligent mental journey...10

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Ritty Patnaik 09 July 2009

sarvesh, it astounds me, from where all this is coming from.a very solid poem, should i say, and divine in approach.thanks for sharing such beautifull work.

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Miriam Maia Padua 09 July 2009

very profoundly written... wonderful and sublime thoughts carved into poetic verses... really has mysterious touch.... thanks for sharing lovelots, maia

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Catrina Heart 05 July 2009

rejuvenates the heart in you, reincarnated your soul to the very essence of your very being...great poem structured with finest diction....10

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Anjali Sinha 04 July 2009

so profound-- this circle of birth and death awesome poem A+++ and 10++ anjali

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