I Am A Man But An Animal Too Poem by Akhtar Jawad

I Am A Man But An Animal Too

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My children planned a visit to a zoo,
They invited me, I replied with a shoo,
I already have a zoo inside, within me,
I cannot show and you cannot see.

All the animals are present in a man,
You can see them with an honest scan.
Both for the friends and their enemies,
They have long, very long memories.

Like funny camels, like large elephants,
Whether old or youths or innocent infants.
They often behave like a beast so wild,
They don't hesitate to abuse a child.

For many centuries they've been killing fellow men,
They have misused their sword and their pen,
Most of their killings were in His religion and name,
Man was never shy of this bloody game.

Men cast their thinking in a too old mold.
Those adventurists seeking silver and gold,
Left footprints of animals in fact,
I see in the prints many criminals in fact.

On the other hand like birds they twit,
Under blue moons are lovely and sweet,
Loyal and faithful like horses and dogs,
Swim and jump just like the frogs,

Entertain the children like a dolphin or a monkey,
Before pretty women they flirt like a donkey,
Like a peacock they dance in a hall,
Like a sweet cuckoo, girlfriends they call.

They are handsome when they love fellow men,
Praise them with their words and use their pen.
I don't need to watch a zoo,
I am a man but an animal too.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Man is still an animal.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 July 2014

Yes bad immoral impious men hav animalistic traits. But a truly good person is elevated above such animal character. Only bad men ape and copy animals. U wrote a fabulous hardhitting poem in great rhyme. Pls review my latest poem, .

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Valsa George 05 July 2014

Man is at once human and beastly! Enjoyed the poem particularly the first two stanzas! It was a grand opening! !

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Khalid Saifullah 19 September 2017

A thoughtful write man is a social animal........................................

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Jaishree Nair 26 March 2015

Lovely poem.we all have animals inside us .It pokes its head out at times.thanks.

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* Sunprincess * 08 July 2014

.............so true both men and animals are made from the same basic ingredients....blood, flesh and hair and each has their own personalities....of course some animals like some men do not have hair...enjoyed this write...

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Savita Tyagi 06 July 2014

Wonderful poem. Each line expressing the thoughts so well. Yes we carry all animal qualities in us. Some time we are worst than animals.

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 July 2014

Beautiful poem. Very true said man is a combination of both. You have explained beautifully in each lines. Loved reading it.

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