I Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

I

Rating: 4.9


could be a beautiful woman on the earth
could be a handsome man in the world
or could even be a barking dog of that neighbour
or could also be that hissing snake there
could either be the faceless mango tree cuckoo
could be the polar bear in that calendar
or could be the teddy bear of that little girl
all could be the same
where to search the one

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R.k Das 26 June 2009

nice thought involving human, animal, bird and reptile imageries, glorious flora and fauna imageries, loved teh poem, thanx

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Chandra Marathe 29 June 2009

What we search for is often among us, it's one of us actually. And you have penned that thought well.

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Jaleel Perinjanam 30 June 2009

all could be same, men and women or polar bear and teddy bear.. in the love of affection.. how to chhose then... nice poem...short and beautiful...

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very nice delivery........ nice topic...........very nice

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Saadat Tahir 25 July 2009

the search for self...never ending saga great poets and philosophers have wracked their heads....doing this stufff the truth of I very well written cheers

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 June 2010

Like if I were…could be…many …‘mes’ in one ‘I’… ubiquitous …centripetal … creative one… Thanks for sharing…Mubeen Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Terence Nabbs 24 October 2009

dear mubeen, you are my all, my everthing. lovely poem terry please give a read

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Emma Adamyan 07 October 2009

greatly talented poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! but greatly simple... members of poemhunter think again...

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Rahul Sharma 27 September 2009

and, i want to say 'YOU ARE A GOOD POET' LOVELY POEM

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 September 2009

a lovely poem on identity...very well done

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