I was born in at daybreak
To the road I did take
Trembling as the ground shakes under my feet
Cracked in the stone heat
Flying all my life like a rose in the wind
Tell me why I am always alone
Alone as I wake, moving in the new place
Shivering as I trace
Road of my own, cut by the deep cold
i like this one as well! You are never alone though! Sometimes it seems that way, but you aren't. i am enjoying reading your poems!
smooth lines...... Alone as I wake, moving in the new place.. i like this like very much
well, I get a positive vibe from the first stanza and a looming pessimism in the 2nd one so here's my take on the poem: life is short, like the piece itself, unclear and though full of opportunity at first, one often gets lonely on their path in life.
This is different, but different is a good thing.....make your work stand my friend
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hmmm interestin write