Hotel Poem by Reddly Raven

Hotel



The keys jangled outside the door.
Wrong one.
Another attempt.
The lock clicked.
Silence.
Door opened.
Street light behind silhouette.
Figure casts shadow onto carpet.

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Smell of gunpowder.
And copper.
Hands wet.
Drops on face.
Dealer on floor.
Lines on table.
Snorts through straw.
More in a bag.
It was now all his.
Footsteps outside.
Approaching fast.
Grabs gun.
Ran for switch.
Lights off.
Knock at the door.
Keys jangle.

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Walking backwards.
Dragging corpse.
Clothes caught on splinter.
Shirt ripped.
Wouldn't mind.
Out back.
Asphalt wet.
Shoes crunch.
Lifted body.
Lain on bench.
Looked asleep.

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Shadow enters.
Keys glint from light outside.
Hear him smelling air.
It reeked of death and drugs.
He fumbles for light switch.
Could have stopped him.
Something cold.
A knife slides in stomach.
Light snaps on.
Figure sees us two.
Both bleeding.
Runs away for phone.
Dealer gets up.
Wipes knife.

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Stood up.
Bleeding from shot wound.
Might heal.
Looks down on customer.
Gotta hide the body.
Need the coke back too.
Pockets the dimes.
Grabs legs.
Drags body from room.

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Glass doors swing open.
Chimes.
Phone next to vending machine.
Dial tone.
Three numbers.
Response.
Description.
Soon sirens.

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Leaves body on bench.
Staggers.
No cover.
Sirens.
Falls to knees.
Crawls.
Under stairs.
Fetal.
Fatal.
Black.
Then white.

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19/04/2012
Dan K. Grosvold

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Wanted to make a time and perspective jump attempt. Inspired in a sense by Frank Miller.
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