Hopeful Awaiting Poem by Wandering Scarlet

Hopeful Awaiting

Rating: 3.5


oh scarlet my honey
if i had you in my arms now
i would kiss your entire body

start from your toes
kiss my way up
and stop at your nose

cradle you like a child
hold you in my arms
let my passion run wild

if only you were here
we could live the moment
rid your heart of fear

for years i await
with hopeful patience
the magic of our first date

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

aww! thats sweet! i like it! i wish my poems were half as good as yours are!

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Evaughn Gray 01 August 2007

'who that has patience may have what he will' waiting will get you far, good poem~hazel

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Anita Blake 01 August 2007

so may await the same first date. i hope some day everyone gets that date great write,10 from me

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 July 2007

I wish you all the success in your hopeful awaiting.

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Cyrina Moon 29 July 2007

Anticipation becomes you. It's a good look. Lovely. Cyrina

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