Honey Melon Moon Tanka Poem by Chen-ou Liu

Honey Melon Moon Tanka



honey melon moon
in the black bowl
of the sky
I remember the taste
of our summer kiss

Monday, October 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: kiss,moon,summer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S H 22 October 2018

I would rewrite it as under: honey milky moon in the black bowl on the sky reminds me the taste of my first summer kiss..

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