Homophones Poem by Christopher's Dead

Homophones

Rating: 5.0


I saw you fall
Your mouth was full of blood
You couldn't hear my voice
I just let you down

I could not catch you
Always too far away
I saw you fall
I just let you down

Lying on the ground
I tried to pick you up
I could not catch you
I just let you down

Don't forgive me now
It is too far gone
Lying on the ground
I just let you down

It should have been me...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Accidental Emo 20 December 2009

Suddenly readin towards the end, Felt some deepness the meanin of the poem, My heart tounched, felt some sadness.. I like this poem, pretty much.. Poetry, we shall never give up =]

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Virginia Garcia 17 December 2009

you have talent. love comes and goes do not blame yourself take the loss and pick up and learn from your loses and become a winner. You are almost there on becoming a better person writing and venting out your feeling heals. TIME HEALS ALL WOUNDS WITHIN AND WITHOUT.

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dymon sidebottom 11 December 2009

amazing! ! ! i loved this..i think this tops all the ones i have read on here! ! ! ! beautiful poem

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moon dust 28 November 2009

O man, wow Christ-Life, wow, I felt this deeply, thank you for sharing your soul.

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Allison Unknown 24 November 2009

this is such a great poem, full of emotion...great job 10-10...

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