Homeless Poem by George Murdock

Homeless

Rating: 5.0


There were song birds sweetly singing
and fawns beside a brook
all the while a mandolin elf
danced atop a book
which lay upon my heaving chest
as I lay beneath a bough
a mattress made of dandelions
defied gravity somehow
When I awoke the day had fled
The shadowed light grew dim
I rose up like the vapor
which floats above the glen
the cold wind seemed then to move me
toward the city’s edge
I rejoined my surly carcass
sleeping neath a bridge.
If I had a dollar
I’d buy a jug of wine
and kiss my lovely mistress
the siren of the vine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynn Glover 13 February 2010

Great poem, great rhythem and structure. You make being homeless sound like something great. Thanks for the sterling poetic values of this poem, Your friend Lynn

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Nimal Dunuhinga 12 October 2009

Hey! George my dear friend I see a poetic feast beside a brook in life...........and the wine tastes Irish!

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Patrick McFarland 26 August 2009

Hi George. This is really terrific. A very enjoyable read. It's going in my favorites.

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Patti Masterman 26 August 2009

This is so poetic and the rhyme and rhythm suited it perfectly. This is perfection in words.

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