Holding My Own Hand. Poem by lilly mandrell

Holding My Own Hand.

Rating: 2.7


Im holding my own hand.
Pretending its someone else.
Wishing it was yours.
Dreaming of how it would feel.

Im holding my own hand.
Thinking about my ex's.
The ones that hurt me.
And the one I messed up on.

Im holding my own hand.
Wishing, Wanting, Hoping Dreaming,
All about someone being by my side.
And holding my hand.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aiden Florence 22 December 2008

Simple, short, yet still good. Nice ideas and transitions of ideas between the stanzas.

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