What You Did To Me. Poem by lilly mandrell

What You Did To Me.

Rating: 3.3


Images, thoughts, feelings of you run through my head
I cant forget what you said.
I want to scream out with frustration and anger
This feeling keeps getting stranger and stranger.

You were the reason I lived now your the reason of my self harm.
The things you said were so full of love and charm.

All I hear now is the sound of my crying myself to sleep.
I feel like Little Bo Peep when she lost her sheep
Confused, angry, mad
hurt alone but most of all sad.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meredith Bullock 22 November 2006

awesome use of language to capture your thoughts.....love the use of Little Bo Peep- it really connects with the reader

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Anna Cellmer 20 March 2006

I think you captured your emotions very well and all flustration is here so widely expressed, I think it's really good emotional write so keep it up :)

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Ndidi Ubogu 19 March 2006

great, this is really a good effort. the poem is nice and i love the image u presented.

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