A place of wonder,
A place of grief,
Where float angels and demons.
Flowers n flames surrounding em,
In a place they call HEAVEN n HELL.
Heaven is like sweet surprise
While, OH! Hell is where torture rise
Heaven blooms with happiness n wise,
While hell craves for revenge n cries.
A lovely place, many say,
With faces beaming day and day
I'm dying of misery, many cry
With dark faces and tear soaked eyes.
Angels gaze at heavens door,
The evil sneer of demons that stroll.
Darkness fails to conquer heaven
While light captures hell
Happiness starts from heavens door
While hell is filled with grief n more
U cannot escape the misery in hell,
While heaven is a place free from spell.
hey again, all ur poems hv gr8 mixture of tots....all very unique and stands for its title...i cant believe if u wrote all dis at the same age...one is matured another a little silly..and it makes a superb combo..u hv given life to all ur tots thru ur peoms..i observe this in ur poems...most of it deals wit man, his tots, his feelings and sort of..and u hv always an upper hand in this..u write 'em well...y don u broden ur imagination, ...take nature, worldly happenings, sort of..try them all..love ur poems...good luck! ! ! ... pls read ma poems too..hv a gr8 time! !
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wow...! ! ! ! a wonderlfull work...grt going