Heaven Poem by Archita Kumar

Heaven

Rating: 5.0


Knock! ! knock! ! Mommy
I am your little baby mommy
Mommy! ! Where do you stay? ?
In your dad's heart baby
Mommy! ! Mommy! ! And me? ?
In my heart my dear.
Knock! ! Knock! ! Mommy
What do you eat? ?
Vegetables and fruits
Andme mommy? ?
The same I eat
Knock! ! Knock! ! Mommy
Whom do you love
Your dadmy dear
And me mommy
Lot more than else my love
Knock! ! Knock! ! Mommy
You told me you live in dad's heart
But where is that heartand where it has come from
My love; it has come from heaven
Where is heaven mommy? ?
It is far far away
Where God lives
But mommy where God lives
My love; In heaven
Mommy where Ilive
In God ‘s place my love
Mommy;In heaven mommy
Yes my dear
Mommy! ! Mommywhen Iwill be with you
Very soon; my love
Mommy! ! Mommy! !
Yes my love
Mommy! !Why do you love me? ?
Because you are my child my love
Heeee heee... She smiles
Mommy! ! Mommy
Yes my love
You love me becauseI am your child
Yes my love
But I thought mommy you love me
Because Iama part of you soul
No my child, you are my everything
Mommy! ! Mommy! ! Don't be sad
I love you mommy! !
You are my whole world mommy
But mommy; Do you love me as I do? ?
A deep silence
Tears ofquestions flowsfrom eyes
Again A deep silence says the rest.

Sunday, June 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: mother,mother and child
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julia Luber 10 June 2019

Very strong poetic themes: Mommy and Heaven.

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Archita Kumar 13 June 2019

I am very thankful

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Archita Kumar 13 June 2019

Thankfull to you

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Bharati Nayak 13 June 2019

But mommy; Do you love me as I do? ? A deep silence Tears ofquestions flowsfrom eyes Again A deep silence says the rest. - - - - A powerful poem on mother child relationship.The child wants the mother to give him all the love.Even mother's assurance does not satisfy him.

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Archita Kumar 13 June 2019

Thank you from my heart

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Sally Plumb Plumb 13 April 2020

I love this sweet child myself.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 October 2019

" I love you mommy! ! " Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 23 June 2019

Most beautiful poem it is.so nice poem. Thanks for sharing your poetic thoughts.100++++++++

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Kim Barney 22 June 2019

An interesting was to tell a story. I enjoyed reading this.

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C F 21 June 2019

A very unusual and unique way to portray the questioning voice of an innocent child... very effective. Very well written.10+

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