Heat Index (Senryu) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Heat Index (Senryu)



last day in august
oscillating table fan ~~
battle to stay cool

© 2016

Wednesday, August 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,weather
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gil Highlander 31 August 2016

Lovely pivot in the last line. It is a battle in life to stay cool. Smart senryu.

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Stephen Park 31 August 2016

totally agree...its hot for the last day of august.

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