Cosmic Couple (Palindrome) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Cosmic Couple (Palindrome)



Shiva and Shakti
Dancing in union
Spirit and matter
Primordially paired...
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Paired primordially...
Matter and spirit
Union in dancing
Shakti and Shiva

© 2016

Saturday, August 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: creation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mike Cohen 08 August 2016

wow, this is superb imagination and a wonderful poem.

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Govind Ramakrishnan 08 August 2016

Thank you sir, appreciate your comments for sure.

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Jenny Straton 08 August 2016

Pregnant with meaning and significance. This poem blends feeling with craftsmanship to create a cocktail that is so beautiful that words simply cannot express.

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Govind Ramakrishnan 08 August 2016

Very inspiring words from you, helps me to keep going and want to write more.

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Paola Gianotti 08 August 2016

simply gorgeous poem. these are very difficult to write and you have done it with relative ease. look forward to more.

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Govind Ramakrishnan 08 August 2016

Am working on a few more. This genre is tricky for sure. Thank you for your comments.

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Ajit Kumar 07 August 2016

This is a truly beautiful poem. The symmetry is exceptional and I loved reading it. Great job.

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Govind Ramakrishnan 08 August 2016

Thanks Ajit for your kind words. Much appreciated.

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Kelly Kurt 06 August 2016

A palindromic poem written as though by a man at least four times older. You are very talented, my friend

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Govind Ramakrishnan 06 August 2016

Coming from you, that's the best any young poet can ask. Hope you are doing well. I totally enjoyed the poem Swifts today. A poem written by a master story teller.

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