Heart Break Poem by Amanda Fenn

Heart Break



Looking at those beautiful eyes
Where i can see your many lies
You said you loved me untill the end
But that's not true you're not even a friend

You made me think that you were the one
You've played with my heart and my emotions won
I try to make the pain go away
But it's too hard and the sky stays grey

The day you said 'we are no more'
I could barely make it out the door
I couldn't say anything to your face
I felt like i was in outer space

Did that just happen? Did my heart just break?
My heart has shattered and there's an unbearable ache
Because of you i cannot love again
My love is hopeless and my life is on the wane

This could have been stopped if only you didn't lie
Because of you all I can do is cry!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 03 April 2009

I like this poem much better than the first. This was a well-written piece. It was direct and clear in meaning. It had both rhyme and flow as well. A nice job, well done. GW62

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