Hate My Fate Poem by Enyinwa Okechukwu Enyinwa

Hate My Fate



Tonight is just another
lonely night when one
feel and touch doubts
but i must scramble my
way out, but if darkness
crowd my heart, i want
you to know that i gave
it all.

Lost in my solitude i
felt the presence of death
griping my heart, i know
that i will not see the end
of my road.

I cry cos i can't looking
to your eyes and say goodbye
don't hate me or our fates
but hate my fate..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Asif Andalib 22 October 2012

I also believe in fate. Good write

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Chitra - 04 November 2012

profound...layers of meaning...something that we all can relate to.

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Some deep sensation indeed, a very good touch of the pen, The_African-Son

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Erika Wingo 25 October 2012

Very deep and melancholy. Keep on writing and creating such wonderful work.

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Shivani Misra 23 October 2012

Yeah. Fate is all what life is all about. Its what decides the fruit of our actions. Nice write. Keep writing.

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Hemraj Koirala 23 October 2012

awesome poem, beautiful imagination, and well written too.

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