Haiku-Vi Poem by Shreej k.c

Haiku-Vi



a stout sparrow's claw
on the tender bamboo shoot-
both bend and sustain

Haiku-Vi
Saturday, May 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: bird
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Picture taken from janzaremba.com as suggested by the forum 'poets unite worldwide'.
Here are earlier 2 haiku attempts inspired by the picture:
1)
a musing zen bird
on the bending bamboo twig
both empty

2)
a lone bird
on the tall growing bamboo
both facing spring sky
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sriranji Aratisankar 14 May 2016

Nice poem. simple. picture attached is also fulfilling. enjoyed. Thank you.

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