Sun, ripe citrus fruit
Sapphire sky flecked with clouds
Tarmac road steaming
Ooooh! Steaming tarmac....Reddened sun.... tr bright blue sky....! You make us feel the heat of summer. Excellent.
Summers are always beautiful to me for some strange reasons.. Maybe just the afternoon's silence, that is wonderful.. A wonderful haiku Valsa ma'am.. Thank you for sharing..
Awesome. Great descriptive skill displayed here. The reader can actually feel the summer heat.
Brilliant write, I felt I was there in summer on that steaming tarmac road as I read your vivid Haiku!
The imagery used is astounding and greatly reminiscent of rich summer. However, I believe the second line only has 6 syllables. Saf-fire (2) sky(1) fleck-d (1) with (1) clou-ds (1) .
A reading of the poem makes me feel the boiling heat of summer on the earth and the celestial beauty up in the sky
Respecting the ways of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
When I think of the tarmac, with undulating hot air distorting the vista, it makes me appreciate winter a little more.: -)