Haiku-Search Poem by Valsa George

Haiku-Search

Rating: 5.0


Sand dunes stretch endless
Eyes search far in hopefulness
An oasis to spot

Sunday, June 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: search
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 June 2017

Oasis is the hope found in the desert. Beautiful haiku.

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Hazel Durham 20 June 2017

Oasis for peace and love in a desert of deserted feelings to connect with zest for living! Superb Haiku!

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Susan Williams 20 June 2017

The portrayal of the verb Search in imagery - - - - - - - - - and in mirages too? You do brevity that is succinct but also full-bodied. These word-images conjure up the real thing as well as paragraphs upon paragraphs and pages upon pages would have done- - better as a matter of fact. May we all spot an oasis in the deserts of our life. Beautiful write- -worthy of Poem of the Day and a million 10's

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Akhtar Jawad 21 June 2017

Life is itself a desert and a moment of love is an oasis. Beautiful poem.

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Anjandev Roy 02 December 2019

Fantastic haiku. Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev roy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 January 2019

Hope-fullness is searched through beauty of vision through eyes. This poem reflects thoughtful attitudes. An interesting state of expression motivates mind. A nice poem is beautifully penned.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 June 2018

A beautiful Haiku dear madam! I derive a great pleasure reading your poems! (10)

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Muhammad Ali 29 July 2017

I try to praise less, most of the time when I read your words, and I feel wordless too. how to express a beauty, that is poetry, and if poem is so natural as a breath, how to comment! eyes are sentenced. masterpiece

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Valsa George 30 July 2017

I am bowled over by your comment..! ! . Thank you so much Muhammed!

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Loke Kok Yee 25 June 2017

Your three lines applies to everything in life, whatever we do; we are always looking for the 'oasis' that will bring us bring us accomplishment. Thank you for this profound Haiku.

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