*** Haiku Of Love *** Comments
Romantic rains falls
Sky leans on the earth to give
mouth watering kiss
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A successful combination of the magic geometry of poetry and the arithmetic of haiku. Best wishes with 10.
The mouth watering kiss did it for me! Such vivid imagery in them all. You are a master poet Anjali. 10 Karin Anderson
A monsoon wedding Sky gives green sari as a gift to darling earth love this haiko... really a sweet one and i feel it the same way you did it.. let me share one of my haiokos here... We know each other since life on earth like kindred spirits
Dear A njali, It's a lovely poem with poignant words, beautiful imageries and thought provoking ideas. It is like a haiku split in three parts leading to a complete meaning. good reading. A-10- FROM ME AS USUAL. iNCIDENTALLY, I HAVE ALREADY COMMENTED UPON AT LEAST SIX OF YOUR POEMS. so no blame game please. now the cricket is on, -Rajkumar
Sky floods with adorable music... The earth bathes in it's waters... Oh the penetrating thunder.... shudeers earth's shoulers... in an area.... The soil being nourished following, wonderful crops.. Yet some area... The soil perished with damp mud earthslips..floods... epidemics... Two sides of a coin, , , ,
well...this poem has to be completed by some human feelings....tht will complement all the beauty shown in ur poem..i guess u know wat i mean to say....
A trio of rain and luv between heaven and earth no wonder Gene Kelly sang 'Singing in the Rain' luvli work with a lot of thought +++10- ironic I penned a similar Tear poem regards ken e
.................. A monsoon wedding Sky gives green sari as a gift to darling earth these lines were really awesome....... i think u r so romantic in ur thoughts......... keep it up......... if u continue ur such writings i think i will be in love with u (who can say?) ...lol
'Romantic, Thunders calling earth in to shying shivers: -) Green Sari: Supurb... lovely
Lots of color and sound with these to appreciate. I like the picture you portray in the first haiku. I like the idea of the sari in the third.
Rain is a wonderful metaphor for both love and music. Praise for your tuneful soul. Lovely work. Warm regards, Sandra
'haiku of love'...must be romantic naturally...and so is, this nice haiku compo...10
Oh so lovely...what a beautiful imagination! Green saari..just luvved it
Love of Sky and Earth... The love is made universal through this piece... It simply asks the reader to fall in love with the beauty around us, which we often miss in this humdrum and materialistic life... Simply loved it… Anju, you know the art- how to reach the heart and soul of your reader… Beautiful…
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Nature infatuation and or mystic Ten+ dr. sakti