Haiku - Half Moon Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - Half Moon

Rating: 5.0


dancing white lilies
copious clouds have swallowed
the half part of moon

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Sharad Bhatia 03 August 2020

बहुत खूबसूरत विवरण... साथ मे तेरे हाथ मे मेरा हाथ, और बादलो का मधुर गाना, जो लगे हम दोनों को सुहाना।।। Rated 10++

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Rajnish Manga 03 August 2020

Dancing white lilies.... What a unique imagery. Loved reading this poem. Thanks, Asim ji.

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 August 2020

Lilies on the pond Twinkling stars in moonlight Greetings the love night

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T Rajan Evol 03 August 2020

great imagery and fantastic haiku.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 August 2020

Amazing 5-7-5 Haiku Half Moon! Fantastically worded. Thank you so much for sharing, Asim Sir!

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Valsa George 03 August 2020

I see this haiku encompassing the water, the earth and the sky! In water, the water lilies, above the Earth the clouds, and in the sky the half moon! A three liner on a panoramic view! Great write, my friend!

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 August 2020

Muse of the moon! ! ! ! With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Suzon Albert 03 August 2020

Your poems on moon is fantastic everytime

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Varsha M 03 August 2020

Good Haiku. Lillies and white clouds swallowing half moon.

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