Haiku ~ Butterflies Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku ~ Butterflies

Rating: 5.0


flying allover
fragrance of roses on wings
see those butterflies

Sunday, April 9, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: butterflies,nature love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 10 April 2023

Nicely inked! Soothing imagery.

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Ricky Mangathen 10 April 2023

Great metaphor and class thinking.

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Sandra Feldman 10 April 2023

Love those 'fragrant roses ' on Butterfly wings. Unforgettable beauty in this poem, sings! lLove it. Thank you gifted poet!

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Richard Wlodarski 10 April 2023

Your beautiful haiku has reawakened my sense of sight and smell. Great job, Friend Nehal!

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Beautiful poem. Deft use of the exquisite metaphor

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Pallab Chaudhury 10 April 2023

beautifully painted one...congrats!

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Indira Renganathan 10 April 2023

I would call those butterflies ' flying flowers'....colourful and fragrant haiku

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 April 2023

A very beautiful poem Asim

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