Haiku - 5 - Origin Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Haiku - 5 - Origin

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Moon has the light,
From sun it does get and give
But origin can fight.

Friday, August 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: truth,universe
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 21 August 2015

Fantastic! I appreciate a well written, intelligent haiku. Well done.

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Ruby Mostazir 22 August 2015

Really a great n intelligent 1

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Ramesh T A 22 August 2015

Sure it can do as you say in the Haiku!

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 August 2015

Very nice. Meaningful drop.

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* Sunprincess * 26 August 2015

............great imagery, so lovely...thank you for sharing ★

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Walterrean Salley 01 March 2018

Moon reflect sunlight. Great haiku.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2016

picture of Elizabeth Squires xA fine haiku my friend. Thanks for sharing. 22 Aug 2015 by Elizabeth Squires | Reply picture of Sneha SK xThis is profound and engaging. Thank you for sharing. 22 Aug 2015 by Sneha SK | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x...........beautiful imagery, both are very special...thank you for sharing ★ 22 Aug 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xPoignant and profound! 26 Aug 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xA nice Haiku Sir. 26 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xInteresting and so true tfs xoxoxo blessings dear friend 27 Aug 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 May 2016

The Universe! ! With the origin of everything. Thanks for sharing.

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Ayman Parray 29 August 2015

I love the moon and everything about it fascinates me. Thanks for the wonderful Haiku

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Savita Tyagi 27 August 2015

Great Haiku. True power lies in origin.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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