Haiku - 7 - Cage Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Haiku - 7 - Cage

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May be cage on gold,
It may be new one or old,
It curbs freedom, bold.

Saturday, September 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 05 September 2015

Very true........Nicely written Haiku.......10

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 05 September 2015

Truly, a cage of gold or so, glittering or so, is worthless as freedom is worthfull and everything.

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Lyn Paul 05 September 2015

Wise man you are Kumarmani. Thank You

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Mj Lemon 08 September 2015

There is indeed so much wisdom and truth here. A trap is a trap, a cage is a cage, no matter how attractive or alluring it may seem. A brilliant work.

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Sanjukta Nag 07 September 2015

Filled with wisdom... three short lines expressing a very big truth. thank you

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Akhtar Jawad 06 September 2015

I remember my university days (In an Indian University) . During election campaign of 1964 Pandit Jawaharlal Nehrue came to Gorakhpur. According to schedule he addressed the students. A barrier was there in between Pandit Ji and the students. Pandit Ji disliked it. He said, I don't know whether I am in a cage or these students are in the cage, remove it. Your poem helped me to recollect that great moment when I saw a true leader.

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Savita Tyagi 05 September 2015

True words of wisdom. Cage is a cage no matter what it is made of. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 05 September 2015

A cage is a cage. Glittering, self made or barbed wire, it restricts

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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