Masaoki Shiki

(1867 - 1902)

Haiku 12 - Poem by Masaoki Shiki

old garden—she empties
a hot-water bottle
under the moon


Comments about Haiku 12 by Masaoki Shiki

  • Gold Star - 14,632 Points * Sunprincess * (4/29/2014 3:41:00 PM)

    ......oh someone is watching her....maybe it is her love....enjoyed.. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 45 Points Colleen Courtney (4/29/2014 8:58:00 AM)

    Short but imaginative. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,612 Points Lady Sad (4/27/2014 5:06:00 AM)

    short but full of creativity (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,632 Points * Sunprincess * (3/9/2014 8:23:00 PM)

    .........an imaginative write... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 1, 2004



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