Haiku 02 Poem by Masaoki Shiki

Haiku 02

Rating: 3.4


the tree cut,
dawn breaks early
at my little window

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 03 December 2016

The tree was hiding the sunrise....Awesome.10+++

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* Sunprincess * 29 April 2014

........truly a master of haiku....beautiful write..

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Colleen Courtney 29 April 2014

More greats written by Shiki!

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Captain Herbert Poetry 27 April 2014

a simple message with simile.. LIKE

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Ron Dragano 01 February 2008

a paradox of loss - do you think he misses the tree?

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